How do you describe what you do in one sentence?
Say who you help, with what, so that what changes: “I help first-time managers run their first performance review, so they walk in with a plan instead of a knot in their stomach.” Specific people, a specific problem, a result they could notice. Twenty examples follow.
The shape
Who you help, with what, so that what. Each part does a job. Who tells the right reader it’s about them. What tells them it’s their problem. So that tells them why they’d pay.
Twenty examples
- A career coach: I help people leaving the armed forces find a civilian job that uses what they already know.
- A math tutor: I help eighth graders who’ve decided they’re bad at math get through algebra without a meltdown at the kitchen table.
- A nutrition consultant: I help shift workers plan meals around nights, so they stop eating from vending machines at 3am.
- A brand designer: I help one-person bakeries look as good on the shelf as they taste.
- A pricing consultant: I help software companies with fewer than twenty staff set prices they can defend to their board.
- A speech coach: I help first-time speakers give a best man’s speech that gets laughs for the right reasons.
- A bookkeeper: I help tradespeople get their books ready for tax season in an afternoon, not a weekend.
- A yoga teacher: I help desk workers loosen their back in a twenty-minute class before work.
- A copywriter: I help therapists write a page that sounds like them, so the right clients get in touch.
- A grant writer: I help small arts charities apply for the grants they keep missing the deadline for.
- A life coach: I help people in their fifties decide what the next ten years are for.
- A photographer: I help families get one photograph a year they’ll put in a frame.
- A language tutor: I help adults moving to Spain hold a conversation with their landlord by the time they arrive.
- An HR consultant: I help companies hiring their first employee get the contract and the paperwork right.
- A music teacher: I help adults who quit piano as children play the piece they always wanted to.
- A fitness trainer: I help new parents get strong enough to carry the car seat without their back complaining.
- A web developer: I help independent shops move off a platform they’ve outgrown without losing a week of sales.
- An interview coach: I help engineers explain their work to an interviewer who isn’t one.
- A sleep consultant: I help parents of toddlers get back to a full night within two weeks.
- An executive coach: I help newly promoted directors stop doing their old job and start doing the new one.
What makes one weak
- Everybody: “I help people live their best life” could be on any page.
- A method instead of a result: “I use evidence-based techniques” says how, not what changes.
- A promise nobody can check: “transform your business” has no way of being true or false.
Write three versions of yours, read each out loud, and keep the one you’d say to a stranger at a party. Your one-sentence description builds it from three answers.
Checked 2026-10-11.