Words to send
The message, already written.
Saying no to a discount, chasing a deposit, asking for a referral. Each page has the message to copy, a shorter or firmer version, and a few lines on why it works.
Pricing
Say the price, what it includes and where to book, in three lines. “A session is $180 for 50 minutes by video, and six are $960. Here’s the link.” A price said plainly reads as confidence. A paragraph before the number reads as an apology.
The words →Keep the price and offer a smaller piece of work. “I can’t do it for less, but I can do the first part for that” is still a yes, and the price stays true for everybody else. A discount for whoever asks is a higher price for everybody who doesn’t.
The words →One message with the scope, the price, the deposit and the date, then the link to accept. “The brand identity is $5,000, half up front, delivered by March 24” is a quote. A range and “let me know what you think” is the start of a negotiation.
The words →Selling more than hours
Send it before the last session, not after. Say what you’d work on next, what the month includes and what it costs: “2 sessions + notes, $480 a month.” A client who has a next step doesn’t have to decide whether to stop.
The words →Say who it’s for, the dates, how many seats and the price, before anything about why it exists. People decide on a course by its dates. A message that leads with the calendar gets booked; one that leads with your story gets saved for later and forgotten.
The words →One paragraph and one link. Say the problem it solves in the reader’s words, what’s in it and the price. A file is a small decision, and a short message keeps it one. Send it to the people who said yes to hearing from you, once.
The words →Three weeks after they bought it, ask how it’s going and offer one session to take it further. Somebody who bought your method has already shown they value it. The message is about where they’ve got to, and the session is the next step, not a pitch.
The words →Agreements and policies
Send it the same day: you waited, you hope they’re all right, the session is charged as agreed, and here’s the link for the next one. Kind first, firm second, and short. If they paid at booking, nothing else is needed. The agreement does the arguing for you.
The words →Say what the agreement says, what you’ve decided, and the next step. “Inside 24 hours the session is charged, so I’m keeping the fee, and here’s the link for another time.” Or, for illness: “I won’t charge for this one.” Decide by your own rule, not by how much you like them.
The words →Two lines, before the first session: the one rule that matters most, and where the rest is. “The one thing to know is that sessions moved inside 24 hours are charged. Everything else is in the agreement you accepted, here.” Point at one sentence, and they’ll read it.
The words →Say what changes, from when, and where to read it, a month ahead. Bookings already made stay on the old terms. One paragraph, one date, one link. Don’t bury the change in a newsletter, and don’t make it sound smaller than it is.
The words →Getting paid
Say what happened, without blame, and send the link to fix it. “This month’s payment didn’t go through, which usually means a card has expired. Here’s the link to update it.” Most declines are an expired card, not a client who can’t pay, so the message treats it that way.
The words →Say why, how much and by when: the deposit holds the start date, it’s half, and the date is held once it’s paid. “Half, $2,500, holds March 3 for you.” Framed as holding something, a deposit reads as a service, not as distrust.
The words →Once, plainly, with the date, the amount and what happens next: “I’ll pause the project from Friday until invoice 1042 is paid, and pick it up the day it is.” No anger, no ultimatum beyond the facts. Sent after the reminders, not instead of them.
The words →Clients
The same day: what you heard, the one offer you’d recommend, its price and its link. “You want to walk into the review with a plan, so I’d start with three sessions, at the single price. Here’s the link.” One recommendation is easier to say yes to than a menu.
The words →Quickly, with one sentence of reason, and with somebody better placed when you know one. “That’s outside what I do, and you’d be better with somebody who does it every day.” A fast no is kinder than a slow maybe, and a good referral is remembered longer than a yes.
The words →In writing, with one sentence of reason, what’s settled both ways, and a door left open. “The work you need next is outside what I do. I’ll refund the two unused sessions, and if things change, you know where I am.” The last message is the one they remember.
The words →Two messages. First, the same day: you’ve read it, you’re taking it seriously, and you’ll answer properly by a date. Then, by that date: what happened as you see it, what you’ll do and by when. Most complaints are about not being heard, and the first message fixes that.
The words →Being found and remembered
At the moment they tell you something went well, in one sentence, with a link. “I’m really glad. If you know anybody else starting a new role, would you send them my page?” Name the kind of person, so they can think of someone, and make passing it on take ten seconds.
The words →Short, specific and soon: who booked, that you’re grateful, and nothing about money. “Priya booked a session this morning and mentioned you. Thank you, that means a lot.” A thank-you that names the person is the reason they’ll refer again.
The words →One person at a time, with what you do, who for, and one link. “I’ve started taking clients for career coaching, mostly people moving into their first management role. If you know anybody, here’s my page.” A personal message to thirty people does more than a post to three thousand.
The words →No pitch, one useful thing. A note that something made you think of them, with an article, an idea or an answer to a question they had. If they want to work together again, they’ll say so. The message’s job is to be worth opening.
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